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Stumbling in at 3 in the morning because you have been drinking the
    pain away. . .

    Doodling little broken, bleeding hearts all over your paper. . .

    Getting nothing done because you have no desire to do anything. . .

    Wondering how it would feel to jump off a cliff. . .

    Catching that scent and missing it so much it makes you cry. . .

    The way your heart feels like somone has stabbed it repeatedly. . .

    The way you don't know if you can survive. . .

    The way you feel like you have smashed into the ground. . .

    Crying yourself to sleep at night because it hurts so bad. . .
Let me know what you think. If you get a chance read the partner poem "Love is. . ."
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lexifish12 Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow...I feel like this, but I'm the one who broke up with my bf.. Is it right for me to feel this way??? I only did it because I felt as though I had to, but now I want him back..... But I don't know if I can get him back....
Xehanortrising Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
So true...
HeartlessEzzy Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2011  Student General Artist
I read them both.
I've been thinking a lot about this lately, because through reasons I won't go into on comments for the whole world to see (send me a note if u want the details) I've recently been coping with rejection AND at the same time being totally enamored with the person whos rejecting you, still being friends with you, and, miraculously, I'm not necessarily sad, yet im heartbroken at the same time... it's pretty difficult to describe.
The interestoing thing is that the two go hand-in-hand. If you focus on someone that much theyre bound to disappoint you at some point. they may make up for it later, but the disappointment WILL occur
Saku-FangRegalia Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2010  Student Writer
thats exactly how i am right now... :) nice poem, tells me exactly how i feel =/
vOdka-addiction-ox Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010
wheyyyy my life for the past month !
Princess-of-Persia94 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2010
This describes a bad falling out with a friend perfectly as well.
Kiourii Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2009
So true :/ It's not getting any better.
Thank you for writing it <3
Zexionlover666 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2009
I am using his shampoo and body wash..i smell like him....

and it hurts.
muppet-chan Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2010
Been there... My brother uses the same deo as him, and it hurts so much every time he's near me.
xerosalvation Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2009
thank you for writing this...:hug:
xerosalvation Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2009
thank you for writing this...:hug:
xHALEYx Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2009
yeah that's pretty much exactly how it is. :'(
Made me cry. xD
HorsLvr1109 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2008
exactly my life at the moment cept the first part..... great here come the tears all over again....
Jazzycinta Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2010
exactly how i am at the moment..... third time today ive cried over him
xXxAnnaleisexXx Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2008
hit the nail on the head with that one =|.
contagious-notes7 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2007
the one about the scent...i found a shirt of mine I hadn't worn in a long time. I hadn't worn it since I washed it at his house because we were outside and fell in the smelled like his detergent and all of his clothes. it was horrifying....lovely...but horrifying.
thatz82 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2006
you nailed my life completley....omg...that is so sad but true.
raven-is-my-name-tt Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2006   Writer
Wow... You just described my life to a tee for the past three weeks...Since the love of my life broke up with me...
ElvenAngel81 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2009
I totally agree with you.. Except mine just happened Tuesday...
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